When Daddy went into the woods
We thought he would never come back
His stumbling walk and slurring talk
And recent heart attack
He made it into the trees
Without tripping over himself
And as he disappeared
We toasted his good health
My mother cracked open a bottle
We had a party that night
When Daddy went into the woods
We drank until first light
We didn’t expect the door
To open again in the morning
We barely had five seconds
A screaming voice; our warning
He held a gun in his hand
And my sister’s hair in his other
She squirmed in his grip, he threatened to rip
Her head off in front of her mother
He took them both away
Into the upstairs room
And that’s when I ran, past his outstretched hand
A shot rang out in the gloom
When Daddy went into the woods
He carried my body in pieces
He buried me variously, often quite carelessly
Food for the birds and the beasties.
Nice piece of writing.. The ending is sad and abrupt but I guess that’s the tone you were likely going for. Nice rhyming and cadence throughout! Good write!!!
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Thank you I’m glad you liked it! x
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